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Paper Composing - Giving "confirmation" 旅游酒店管理 07301744 张嘉阳 07301755 赵袆 07301729 姚思慧 Substance Section 1:First draft of us Section 2:Discuss the proof we use in our articles Section 3:Our last draft Section 4:Writing procedure and what we find out about confirmation Section 5:The end
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Paper Writing - Providing “evidence” 旅游酒店管理 07301744 张嘉阳 07301755 赵袆 07301729 姚思慧

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CONTENTS Part 1:First draft of us Part 2:Discuss the proof we use in our papers Part 3:Our last draft Part 4:Writing procedure and what we find out about confirmation Part 5:The end

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Can Man Triumph over Nature (by Yishire ) As the old saying goes, ”Man can vanquish nature”. To be sure ,our precursors had been battling against nature since the stone age. They made skins of creatures into dress to cover themselves from cool climate, set flame for warmness and shield themselves from wild creatures. They barely made due from the vile environment. What\'s more, these days, we have Three Gorges Project to stay away from surges, and completion Qinghai—Tibet Railway to enhance the poor circumstance of transportation. By and by, we can’t break experiencing fiascos, for example, tidal wave, SARS, snowstorm, quake etc, in light of the fact that nature is so intense and these are unavoidable. Possibly we can’t make a conclusion whether man can or can’t triumph over nature. In any case, we ought to gain from these two sides that something nature is unavoidable. What we can do is united individuals and attempt to diminish the damage to a satisfactory degree.

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Can Man Triumph over Nature (by Sweet) Similar to most people’s feelings, I don’t think it is a simple addressed inquiry that man can or can\'t triumph our inclination. To a few individuals, they’re for it. Considered to have been producing for quite a while ,human is certain to achieve the point to triumph over nature. For instance, human make extensive amounts of biochemical weapons which can demolish the earth a few times. Then again, a few individuals are against it. From their perspectives, there is most likely nature starts things out and won’t be vanquished by human. They demand that human is only an animal amid the nature\'s advancement and the catastrophes human endure may be the best illustrations to bolster their perspectives. To the extent I’m worried, there is no consummation for this open deliberation and even no compelling reason to put a conclusion to it. As I see it ,the relationship in the middle of nature and human is similar to mother and youngster. There is no denying that mother and kid ought to stay together calmly and in addition congruously .therefore ,what we human ought to do most is to secure the nature and make best of it for the improvements. Just along these lines would we be able to pick up an enduring advancement on the equalization of human and nature.

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Can Man Triumph Over Nature( by Joy) When it results in these present circumstances inquiry, well, distinctive individuals may have diverse sentiments. A few individuals hold the perspective that we people can vanquish nature. As the old saying goes,” where there is a will, there is a way”. All through the history, we have seen numerous cases in which this idiom has over and over turned out to be valid. Climbing the Everest which is the most noteworthy mountain on the planet, setting out to Antarctica, or having a trek to the moon. The Great Wall and the Pyramids additionally demonstrate the enormous force of people. In the mean time, in any case, there’re a few individuals who put stock in the inverse. Despite the fact that, the innovation and science have been growing quickly, there’s as yet something on the planet past our capacity, SARS, birdflu, AIDS, and some different sorts of illnesses are undermining our lives. What’s more terrible, more fiascos, for example, tidal wave, surge, snowstorm ,seismic tremor happen all the more as often as possible, bringing on unfathomable misfortune to people. Along these lines, as should be obvious, man can not triumph over nature. Furthermore, splendid future just relies on upon an agreeable association with nature.

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Evidence that is for man can triumph over nature 1 Our predecessors made skins of creatures into garments to cover themselves from chilly climate, set flame for warmness and shield themselves from wild creatures. 2 Nowadays,we have Three Gorges Project to maintain a strategic distance from surges. 3 Finish Qinghai—Tibet Railway to enhance the poor circumstance of transportation. 4 Human make substantial amounts of biochemical weapons which can demolish the earth a few times. 5 The old saying “where there is a will, there is a way” 6 Climbing the Everes t and heading out to Antarctica . 7 Having an outing to the moon 8 The Great Wall and the Pyramids demonstrate the colossal force of people

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Evidence that is against it 1 SARS, birdflu, AIDS, and some different sorts of ailments . 2 Disasters, for example, torrent, surge, snowstorm ,seismic tremor happen all the more habitually, bringing about unfathomable misfortune to people.

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Can Man Triumph Over Nature There is no agreement of sentiments among individuals as to the perspective of man can or can\'t triumph over nature. A few individuals hold the perspective that we people can triumph over nature. Generally as the old saying goes,“ Where there is a will, there is a way.” Looking back to the history, we can see numerous cases in which this adage has over and over ended up being valid. They can think about no better delineation of the perspective that, previously ,our predecessors made skins of creatures into garments to shield themselves from chilly climate, set flame for warmness. Then again, back to now, the Qinghai-Tibet Railway was done to enhance the poor circumstance of transportation there. In the mean time, on the other hand, there’re a few individuals who have confidence in the inverse side. Actualities are truly enough. The green house impact leaves islands and urban areas along the coast, for example, the oriental pearl-Shanghai, in threat of the debacle of being

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suffocated; the ozone\'s openings layer make the earth less suitable to live for a few creatures including individuals; the marvels of EL Nino and La Nina leave the area with genuine surge and dry spell, and the illnesses, brought about by contamination, are expanding at a shocking velocity, bringing about Seeing every one of these realities, would we be able to still overlook the counterattack of nature? We are not the experts of nature. Confronting every one of the calamities made independent from anyone else, we, humanity ought to understand that we are only a typical individual from the enormous group of nature. Any activity that devastate nature will meet just with the requital from her. So as should be obvious, there is no completion for this civil argument. My own experience drives me to infer that Preserving nature is safeguarding our home, as well as the development of human group too. So we ought to treat nature similarly, leaving the shot of presence and advancement to nature as we are having a striking resemblance thing, and subsequently we will get the circumstance of win-win!

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We composed the exposition as per the accompanying layout: 1 We can make an extensive rundown of examples that show man can triumph over nature. 2 On the other hand, we can refer to various cases that show strengths of nature are too effective to possibly be stood up to. 3 How you take a gander at the apparently opposing proof.

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Process…

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Types of proof 1. 可以通过例证( cases )的方法,即通过生æ\'»ä¸­å…·ä½“真实的经历、或故事作为论据阐述自己观点的正确性。 2. 也可以通过用事实法( truths ) , 即通过调查研究的结果或统计数据或已经形成的事实作为论据使对方信服。

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Types of confirmation 3. 可利用一个原则( speaking to rule ),首先确立一个公认的基本原则和常理,然后使文中所讨论的观点符合这个原则,以达到è¯\'服对方或确认自己观点正确的目的。 4. 还可以采用权威观点( alluding to a power ),即引用所讨论主题方面的专家的观点作为论据来è¯\'服对方。

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How to join the “evidence” When to rundown proof ,utilize the accompanying structures may assist you with betterring express your perspectives 1 ) initially, second, third, last (不推荐,原因:俗) 2 ) firstly, also, thirdly, at last (不推荐,原因:俗) 3 ) the to start with, the second, the third, the last (不推荐,原因:俗) 4 ) in any case, in the second place, in the third place, in conclusion (不推荐,原因:俗ï

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